Opposite seas (written for someone very special to me.)

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Wednesday, 03-Nov-2010 7:22:06

Although we are on opposite shores of opposite seas.
Your heart still calls and beckons to me.
Although your people sing a different song.
You invite me to sing along.

Although your country is foreign land.
You’d reach across time to hold my foreign hand.
Although I’m young and Naive.
You see the wisdom beneath.

Although we are strangers.
Its you I miss.
Although its impossible,
In my dreams its you I kiss.

Although your laughter is smooth and rolling like the Pacific waves.
Wrapped in Atlantic lust its you I crave.
Although I’ve lost sight of magic and love.
My heart would remember it with your touch.

Although our sun’s rise on different shores.
In a battle to love, we fight the same war.
Although we know better we continue to trust.
And instead of a need its become a must.

Although the world has taught me different I feel I’m falling fast.
The future is unclear to me but I’ve found some hope at last.
Although endings are inevitable.
Beginnings are unforgettable.

And Although we are on opposite shores of opposite seas.
Your heart still calls and beckons to me.

Post 2 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Wednesday, 03-Nov-2010 7:23:28

I will be the first to comment. This is not my best work. But when u feel like u r falling in love, words don't come easy. And though its not my best, it comes from the depths of my heart. Once i am more comfortable with the idea, i am sure u will see some some much better posts.

Post 3 by margorp (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Wednesday, 03-Nov-2010 13:04:04

I think it's a nice poem, best or not.

Post 4 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Wednesday, 03-Nov-2010 13:12:12

That was good.

Post 5 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Thursday, 04-Nov-2010 17:17:31

kayla you are amazing. i wish words came out so easy to me, too, my works are never the best works because i can't give an idea of what i want to say and end up writing stuff very similar to pop songs for 13 year olds, lol. I do love your writings.

Post 6 by pyromaniac (Burning all of mankind to dust. ) on Sunday, 07-Nov-2010 15:04:45

Awwwwwwww?

Post 7 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Friday, 26-Nov-2010 2:10:39

awe lorrie thank u. and i love your writings as well, i always feel the emotion behind them. and margorp thank u also for the compliment.